With increasing awareness, examples of river-floodplain systems restoration measures or works aiming to improve river-floodplain systems function are getting rising. In this sense, here we presented two examples aiming to improve river-floodplain systems conditions. One of them is work from the Danube river basin, which examines river-floodplain restoration potentials and showing broad sense collaboration perspective in the international river basin. The other is the Skjern River Restoration, which is one of the successful examples of river-floodplain restoration measures.
"With increasing awareness, examples of river-floodplain systems restoration measures or works aiming to improve river-floodplain systems function are getting rising.": "are getting rising" is an odd expression.
"broad sense collaboration perspective": What the heck is that?
The Skjern as "one of the successful examples" implies that other examples (e.g. the Danube) are unsuccessful?
The Skjern as "one of the successful examples" implies that other examples (e.g. the Danube) are unsuccessful?
Also a question for what successfull. Should be explained precisely.
Box 4: "Changes in the natural hydrological regimes and geomorphological process" - I would suggest the write "regime" and "processes" instead.
Box 4: "km2" with "2" in superscript
Either write "ha" or "hectar" throughout the report.
Box 4: When writing about floodplain percentages remaining, you should also give percentages of the area of reconnection potential in the sentences below.
Box 4, Page 30: The information about the planned measures in given twice above and below the sub-header "Estimated effect of measures ...".
Box 4: What does "JPM" stand for?
Box 5: The figure's legend is in Danish.
Box 5: Remove comma after "10 years of monitoring following the restoration,"
Box 6: Remove "provide examples"
Box 6: Replace "forrests" by "forests".
Write "Flood Risk Management Plans" with upper case first letters throughout the report
Box 6: Write "authorities" instead of "autorities"
Box 6: Write "although" instead of "all though".
What are the key messages and lessions we can learn from these case studies?
Propose to shortly elaborate the common messages which can be extracted from the studies
POLAND
box 4, map 1: Overview
incomplete figure
HU
On page 29 of the planned report, Chapter 3.3: 'Examples of river ad floodplain restoration', at the Danube river basin level, for example, Hungarian projects are also missing: e.g. Tisza Floodplain Project (which has also nature conservation works).