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Note: Numbers in brackets indicate the number of monitoring stations available for trend analysis. Decreasing groundwater level trends (orange) range between -0.01 metres and more than -2 metres per year. Increasing groundwater levels trends (blue) range between +0.01 metres per year and more than +2 metres per year. UN M49 standard is used for grouping the countries where data is available for the indicator assessment: Eastern Europe - Bulgaria, Poland, Slovakia; Northern Europe: Denmark, Estonia, Ireland, Lithuania, Latvia, Sweden; Southern Europe: Cyprus, Greece, Italy, North Macedonia, Slovenia; Western Europe: Austria, Belgium,  France, Netherlands, Switzerland.

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  • farrereg (Regis Farret) 29 Sep 2021 11:45:14

    The phrase "increasing trend in Eastern Europe" is misleading, because only Poland is increasing, it is not the case for any other country, even in Eatern Europe.  Therefore the graph with the regions is also misleading.

    Additionally, the trend is so much positive in Poland, as compared to all other countries, that it could be interesting to study deeper the reasons before communicating on the indicator.

    As concerns "Southern Europe", it might be also misleading since Spain and Portugal are missing. Therefore EEA could, either suppress Fig.1a, or at least add strict comments and caution for the reader.

    • zalllnih (Nihat Zal) 26 Nov 2021 15:19:54

      Thank you for your comments.

      During the Eionet consultation we discovered that the monitoring data series from Poland were entered in the database in another unit (meter below surface – as depth) than what is described in the WISE data dictionary (meter with respect to sea level). As a result, Poland was removed from the indicator assessment. The resulting countries in Eastern Europe (Bulgaria and Slovakia) show on average a decreasing groundwater level trend.

       Because of the limited number of countries in most of the regions, the regional aggregation of groundwater level trends is removed form Figure 1a, as was suggested by the reviewer. We present the groundwater level trend at the aggregation level of countries, while grouping the countries in the four regions in the bar-plot (new Figure 1b).

      The phrase "increasing trend in Eastern Europe" is misleading, because only Poland is increasing, it is not the case for any other country, even in Eatern Europe.  Therefore the graph with the regions is also misleading.

      Additionally, the trend is so much positive in Poland, as compared to all other countries, that it could be interesting to study deeper the reasons before communicating on the indicator.

      As concerns "Southern Europe", it might be also misleading since Spain and Portugal are missing. Therefore EEA could, either suppress Fig.1a, or at least add strict comments and caution for the reader.

       

  • scheidand (Andreas Scheidleder) 22 Oct 2021 13:42:41

    Comment from AT:

    What does the range mean? what means “… more than -2 meters”?: either use only “…more than + or -0.01 metres per year” or indicate the maximum of groundwater level trends to give the range. Otherwise the message of range and "…more than 2 metres” means nothing.

    It should be clarified whether the monitoring stations are representative.

    • zalllnih (Nihat Zal) 26 Nov 2021 15:23:19

       Thank you for your comments.  We agree that this classification is too vague and it is improved. However, with the purpose of conveying a clear message to policy makers we maintain the representation in three classes in the figures instead of a more detailed classification.

       In the section with supportin information, the classes are described as:

      • Increasing groundwater level trend: GLT > 0 m/y and p-value < 0.05
      • No significant trend observed: p-value > 0.05
      • Decreasing groundwater level trend: GLT < 0 m/y and p-value < 0.05

       Also, additional information on the distribution over these classes is provided in the note section of Figure 1a and 1b:

      “It can be observed that 11% of the monitoring stations show a downward trend (less than 0.1 m/y decrease: 4%; between 0.1 and 1 m/y decrease: 6%; decrease of more than 1 m/y: less than 1%), 6% of the monitoring stations show an upward trend (less than 0.1 m/y increase: 2%, between 0.1 and 1 m/y increase: 3%; decrease of more than 1 m/y: less than 1%) and 83% of the monitoring stations show no significant trend.”

       The representativity of the monitoring stations could not be verified, because no inofrmation about this is available in the WISE database. For those countries that submitted a large amount of data that cover a large part of the country, the spatial representativity of the dataset will be better  probably better than for the countries that submitted a small amount of data or data that cover only part of the country. We improved the assessment section of draft indicator by the following:

      • We specified the sentence about data improvement in the first section of the indicator sheet: “The length and representativeness of the underlying data needs to be improved by Eionet member countries to enable more robust assessment of the change in groundwater level in Europe.”
      • The second paragraf of the indicator sheet provides more information about the approach and limitations: “The Groundwater Level Trend indicator assesses the annual groundwater level change across Europe, covering the period 2000-2019 based on WISE SoE Water quantity data reported by EEA member countries. The spatial distribution and length of the available groundwater level data series was limited and varied strongly between and within countries. With the intention to make best use of the capacity of the available groundwater level dataset, a minimum number of 5 annual records within the 20-year period was set as a requirement. The indicator dataset covered 17 from the 38 European countries and consisted of 3114 monitoring stations (24% of reported stations).”
      • In the section “supporting information”, we added the following paragraph about this topic: “No additional information or metadata is available for the groundwater monitoring stations reported in the WISE SoE. Data that provide the specifics of the measurement location (eg. filter depth), the geohydrological setting (mountainous, coastal, river plain), the type of aquifer (confined, semi-confined, unconfined), the aquifer properties (eg. transmissivity of sedimentary, karstic, hard-rock aquifers), as well as information related to climate and land use are required to interpret the behaviour of the groundwater level changes and trends. Moreover, without such information the representativeness of the available monitoring stations in terms of spatial distribution cannot be determined.”

      Comment from AT:

      What does the range mean? what means “… more than -2 meters”?: either use only “…more than + or -0.01 metres per year” or indicate the maximum of groundwater level trends to give the range. Otherwise the message of range and "…more than 2 metres” means nothing.

      It should be clarified whether the monitoring stations are representative.

       

  • bednamal (Malgorzata Bednarek) 22 Oct 2021 16:11:46

    POLAND

    Comments:

    It should be recalculated - as explained above.

    The title is wrong as it suggests data availability for the whole period 2000-2019, while data availability for various countries in not uniform:

    Country_Code

    Since Year

    AT

    2008

    BE

    2009

    BG

    2010

    CH

    2010

    CY

    2000

    DK

    2003

    EE

    2011

    EL

    2004

    FR

    2013

    IE

    2015

    IT

    2014

    LT

    2008

    LV

    2015

    MK

    2011

    NL

    2011

    PL

    2013

    SE

    2009

    SI

    2013

    SK

    2007

    • zalllnih (Nihat Zal) 26 Nov 2021 15:25:05

      Thank you for your comment

      The required units of the data are described in the WISE data dictionary. For groundwater levels this is groundwater heads (m) with respect to sea level. During revision, the data from the Polish monitoring stations were removed from indicator assessment and the indicator sheet. When the data for these monitoring station are uploaded again in the unit described by the WISE data dictionary, they can be taken up in the assessment of the groundwater level trends again.

      The suggestion to provide information about the data period per countries was adopted in the indicator sheet. We added the time period of data availability for each country in the note section of the new figure 1a and 1b: Eastern Europe: Bulgaria (2010-2019), Slovakia (2007-2019); Northern Europe: Denmark (2000-2019), Estonia (2011-2019), Ireland (2000-2019), Lithuania (2008-2019), Latvia (2006-2019), Sweden (2009-2019); Southern Europe: Cyprus (2000-2018), Italy (2013-2019), North Macedonia (2011-2019), Slovenia (2006-2019); Western Europe: Austria (2008-2018), Belgium (2005-2019), France (2013-2018), Netherlands (2011-2019), Switzerland (2002-2019). Years between brackets behind the country names indicate the earliest and latest year for which data was reported.”

      In addition, a detailed overview in tabular format of the length and number of monitoring stations is provided in the “supporting information” (methodlogy section).

      POLAND

      Comments:

      It should be recalculated - as explained above.

      The title is wrong as it suggests data availability for the whole period 2000-2019, while data availability for various countries in not uniform:

      Country_Code

      Since Year

      AT

      2008

      BE

      2009

      BG

      2010

      CH

      2010

      CY

      2000

      DK

      2003

      EE

      2011

      EL

      2004

      FR

      2013

      IE

      2015

      IT

      2014

      LT

      2008

      LV

      2015

      MK

      2011

      NL

      2011

      PL

      2013

      SE

      2009

      SI

      2013

      SK

      2007

       

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